One of my major contributions to the script was Cheryl's freak out at the top of the page. I feel like it was necessary to devote a little bit of space to Cheryl losing it after learning that she's had an Angel Fetus growing inside her for the last nine months. It also leads to a nice, personal moment between her and Octopus Jones, which is important, because their relationship is kind of the heart of the story.
Other than that, there's lots of fun little moments here. I love the way Boolah writes Sol (he practically drips bravado). Run-No-No-Run can't grasp the seriousness of the situation. The Puzzelor breaks the fourth wall, and Platageddon finally wakes up, completely missing all of the relevant Plot Exposition. A very TORC Press page.
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