I kinda screwed up the storytelling on this page. By placing the Death Moth's head in the corner in the extreme foreground like I did, it kinda looks like the other members of the Skull Mob are attacking him while his back is turned. It's an awkward panel. Other than that, I hope it's obvious that the guy with the exposed brain for a head is a living bomb that explodes in the final panel. If it wasn't obvious, I have now pointed it out, thus clearing up any storytelling confusion I might have created. Ta-Da!
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