As I have said before, I'm still not used to working with a Script yet. Case in point, in the Script for this page there's a small inset panel in the lower right hand corner that had the following:
Panel 1: Mystery Man, Tea Cup and Plat are lying down messed, looking on in wonder as to what is going to happen. TC points towards the two about to collide.
TC: That Vertionce fella’s got a helmet that looks like a
But, because I didn't reference the Script when I was doing the pencil and ink work, I missed this little moment entirely. Having said that, in my capacity as editor, I probably would have deleted that panel anyway, because A) we've established the three characters involved are too busted up to be doing any commentary from the peanut gallery anyway (the Mystery Man is flat out unconscious), and B) the inset panel would have deflated the tension of the moment, as our Hero prepares to collide with the Boss of the Evil Angels.
Still, I apologize to Boolah for screwing this page up. I think maybe I need to start making Print copies of my Scripts some I can keep track of stuff. Also, it is unfortunate that the only instance in the entire Event where someone points out the rather... phallic... nature of the Vertionce's ridiculous helmet got left on the cutting room floor.
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